Review Detail of wickedwinter in Damn, I'm Wreaking Havoc

I'll be honest. I haven't read much fantasy here in Webnovel. I've mostly read Western Fantasy Novels. Damn, I'm Wreaking Havoc reads like a game fantasy novel. The first two chapters felt more like a prologue than real ones. There are only three chapters so it's hard to judge the plot yet. The first chapter has info dumps but it gives the reader an impression that the author has thought a lot about the background of the story and the characters which is a good sign. The grammar could be improved more. The third chapter is far better and following that, I'm sure the author will improve as well. I liked the three characters as well as how they have their own specific powers. Good luck with your work! Keep writing!