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FlargoLv15yr
2020-01-16 08:03

Just make quick account to post this review here as I read the book somewhere else. Dunno if naming sites is against TOS of this site. This review has been written while I still haven't finished the whole book as I'm trying to get my amazon account unsuspended. What happens when the world seems to want to screw you over at each turn. When fate and mathematics both point out that you should have been lying in your grave a long time ago. Dio is born. The man who shall carry the fate of the world or garner enough attention of all psychos for long enough so that the rest of the men population has time to procreate. Dio, the most unlucky of unluckiest carries on in the world that wants to give him nothing more than a stick. The story itself holds both a lot of suspensions and charm at the same time. The story is gruesome, don't take that wrong. There will be a mountain of gore before the tale ends. Yet whenever Dio talks with someone who is a woman, both his never-ending suspicion and skepticism that he is talking to another Yandere make me crack a smile. Both at the wit of the conversation and ridiculousness that preserves in it. The supernatural elements are done very well. I'm still not sure whatever Dio is bat**** insane, or there is more to everything that's happening though I would like to know if ghost gf is waifu material or not. Still, the mystery of the situation is indeed very entertaining. Dio is a character that, in the end, despite everything that's happening to him, chooses to prevail. He may be quite smart, yet it's not thanks only to his intelligence that he survives, but thanks to his unwillingness to give up and stop moving even when he is clearly at his wit's end. Tbh I'm not that good at grammar, so there is not much I can say about it. It seems good to me. I also like the style in which the book is written, and while it's more similar to Japanese light novels, it's undoubtedly not inadequate or lacking coherence. The world flow is excellent, and the storytelling is really immersive. I want to get my amazon account back to continue reading this. Should have downloaded a copy for offline reading :/. Once I read the whole thing, I will write a more thorough review.

My Psychotic Ghost Girlfriend an Isekai Experiment Gone Wrong

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