First of all people who are commenting about grammar usage, I want to assure you other than not using capitalization and punctuation you're fine in this regard. ❤ Quoting the title it's good and goes with the plotline inside. Giving remarks to story,I haven't seen anything based on constellations and astronomy or its only me who haven't passed by such stuff. But if there would be such thematic elements used then those novels would be in lesser amount. So it's a good beginning to write with such a different theme, moreover the pace is good and the package is worth reading.
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