The premise of the story is good. There's background for the characters. I am enjoying the book so far and I will continue to read. I hope the author won't mind if I send you some things to help with English Grammer. As I have read that English is not a language that you know well. I will look forward to seeing you improve and reading the progression in the story. Shiro~
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