It has been a long time since I connected to this appli. So let me give you a honest review. Frankly your grammar suck, English isn't my first either but that doesn't mean I don't have the right to say that other suckđ. As for the story itself, well you didn't write enough, but I like the idea behind your story. It's not the most original one, but as long as you use it properly the result could be a very great story. So work hard. Also, three chapters a week is good, but as a new story, try to make 6 or 7 seven chapters a week for a fews week before reverting to only 3 a week. In the end, your story is just a little above average but still entertaining if you manage your plot well.
RedLaw
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