Review Detail of Zyanide100 in The Slime Farmer

I really liked this book for many reasons. While there are only four chapters out, the author has greatly impressed me with character writing as well as attention to detail. These two, so far, are the strongest parts of the story in my opinion. As far as character writing goes, the reason I loved this part is because of how the author has been able to 'show' the characters, especially the MC and Garun, through their actions and dialogues. I now have general feel for both of them and while I may need to read more to actually start loving them, I can safely say that I really like them already. Attention to detail, well, this is just something that you either do well or don't. The author did it well. Right amount of detail at right amounts of time was given. The only time I felt this aspect a little out of proportion is the first chapter. As people, we are all knowledgeable and passionate about different things. I can assume that you like talking about farming and soil and related things. However, your readers aren't bound to be the same. I am not telling you to not talk about what you like. In fact, it's best if you do. Just, I think it would be beneficial to do it slowly, through a no. of scenes rather than just one or two. So far, so good. I get the world-building feel from this book and will be excited to see what world-building we get further down the line. Keep up the good work, author!