Review Detail of Glitner in Alonnnzziiii

Its pretty Good but sometimes you usa weird words dunno if its your natural language coming in But instead of somthing as simpel as a sealed scroll you write berngitmo or somthing pretty hard do understand Ryuga instead of hyuuga, and you keep talking about meridians of the body when its chakra pathways sometimes renaming things like that make the story seem lesser ... just a tought well thats just my opinion Overall its Good