Wanted to like this story, really did, but the MC does indeed have, pardon my french "Dicks for brains". As others have stated, telling someone that you barely know only through a screen a heaven defying secret to a person that had been betrayed multiple times and sells information for the highest price too, I question the logic that brought you to make your MC like this. Nice Guy MC who kills in the name of Justice, what a guy.
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