Review Detail of SaikoYonebayashi in One Piece: Harem King

The story is good up till now (chap 22) i think. But of course there will be some things that's needed to be improved. The MC for the beginning look like a naive type,but don't worry guys he is improving. Author doing a good job to improve the MC, it's the part of character development so don't worry. It's one of the good One Piece fan fic here. Keep reading and be patient for the first couple chapter,cause it became better with every chapter. Lastly keep up the good work and good luck.