Review Detail of BaeVida in To Reach You

Okay, for the review. Nice synopsis. Writing quality, character development.... Update stability... Trust me, d more update u get, the more views couples wit powerstone votes. Of which u are your biggest fan in that regard. Now your story is good. The problem I have as a reader, it would be better if you could separate their thoughts from your normal narration. Perhaps u can put it in a bracket or something to differentiate and give an info about that parenthesis at the beginning of a chapter, so they understand. Or simply just... Let me leave that, u know what suits u best. I say that because sometimes u merged the thoughts and narration and talk. I can distinguish but it wud disturb d flow of reading. Little typos but as a writer I can clearly understand, av got those too in my books. So when people make reference I go change them. For a newbie, you are doing a great job. Keep it up.