Review Detail of mooneless in Empress of Business World

Item: Empress of Business World
Rating: 3

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moonelessLv103yrmooneless

The idea of the story seems very nice and i really want to keep reading to see if anything happends. I have read 30 chapters so far, but there has been no progression, it even feels like the novel focus more on side characters than the actuall FL. Anyone here who has read all chapters and know if the story gets better and start to focus on FL?

Empress of Business World

Ms_Anonymous

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Ms_AnonymousAuthorMs_Anonymous

hello, yeah as u said its slow. the first volume is a bit slow. Because I planned to show her progress bit by bit. But in that process, it turned out to be slow.

3yr