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Dhane_Shini
Dhane_ShiniLv23yrDhane_Shini

Overall good story, but hate the way how you're nagging a character for so long ? After passed alot of chapter , still there's no man lead. Not very muchly satisfied and not very unsatisfied. Improve on grammatical errors and make ur story interesting. There's will be more readers than u expected. Good luck 👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Empress of Business World

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Mack_an_Cheese
Mack_an_CheeseLv3Mack_an_Cheese

Dude... no offence but you check your grammar first! :p