Nice story so far. Actually I never got bored these first chapters until now, even if some consider it an infodump. Actually it’s a nice and rather detailed backstory you don’t really see in other fanfictions, where the Mc just jumps into the plot. That said you world background and character design are nice, especially considering it’s a fanfiction. Aside from that I think it’s nice that you get absorbed into writing even if the chapters take longer. So far nothing really negative, though I would tell you :D
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Thank you for your support! And yes, do tell me if anything gets out of hand; I will do my best to fix. Also, I recently edited chapter 8's author notes if you want to check it out. It would give you a better overview of why I decided to write those beginning chapters in the first place. Thanks again! :)
