Review Detail of Monologamy in MAHITERRA

As of now, I am writing for the sake of writing and have barely done any back reading for quality check. It is, in other words, RAW. I will do quality checks from time to time, however seeing as I am not a professional writer errors would still remain. This is a passion project, to keep my sanity in-check. Any appreciation of this work goes a long way, so does constructive criticism. Constructive Criticism - don't just point out my mistakes, offer a solution/alternative it goes a long way.