Capรญtulo 28 It's good enough. I personally don't like harems so this Is not my style at all. I didn't like the idea about killing alduin so early in the story but when the mc became the dragonking because of that made me feel excited about what will happen from then on, Now for the bad things... I feel all the characters a little void, the mc is very plain just like all the other characters here. The only moment that the mc gave me the impression of being alive was when he challenge ulfric to a duel, that was awesome by the way, but all the other times he was void, no likes, no dislikes, barely an ounce of emotion in his talking and actions, aela looks like a sex addict in this story cause that's the on!y thing she does, lucia Is fine but i can't understand how can she be so happy with his parents always far away, that not normal, an abandoned girl that gets adopted is logical that the thing she want the most is attention from her parents. And now this last chapter Is the last for me. This man accept to marry a 1 month widow with the reason of ending a civil war when he can end it as Easy as breathing, he killed the devourer of worlds bit can't end a civil war in another way. And the thing that annoy me the romance don't existe here, they only care about sex. I understand that in Skyrim marriage is very simple and direct but the mc is from another world and his wife Is an elf, if you want an harem at least put some effort. Overall good writing quality, if there are some mistakes they doesn't make the reading unconfortable, nice updating pace and good ideas for the stoey but i don't like the characters design and specially the romance if there's romance.
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