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Thutmose
ThutmoseLv55yr
2019-10-29 04:22

I love the story and characters. They don’t feel like one dimensional, they have nuances in the way they act or what they say or don’t say. I like the plot and the main character. She has a lot of nuances and flaws that make her seem real as do the other characters like Odin and Frigg. The writing quality is on point. The story is well edited from what I could see. Updating stability could be questioned but then again life happens. I just hope the story gets completed cause it is really good. The world feels lived in and nuanced, only question is how are you gonna expand on that as the story unfolds. I really look forward to it. Definitely recommend giving this story a read and adding it to your library.

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CDR_Grae
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Oh my, thank you so much!! I believe that character development and building Asgard further instead of just relying on what the MCU said about it is important because I know it will make the story seem genuine and real. I am so glad you think so too! I am so careful not to make Hela a Mary Sue but it's been difficult because Hela is just naturally powerful both in the MCU and the myths, though I think I'm doing well in that regard judging by what you said lol thank god. And yes, updating can be a bit irregular because I'm still making this story up as I go along lol but I have a general plan and direction now. Again, thank you so much for sharing your honest thoughts and for the compliments, I'll do my best to improve on those. ^^

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