Review Detail of akera in What's A King Without A System?
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Okay so, i was searching for a kingdom building story, and i stumbled on this. There are 2 arcs/books for this story, and the feeling i got is that book 2 is an improved Book 1 after the author decided to scrap Book 1 and go again. For now there isn't really a kingdom building taking place, but the elements of it are there so i feel like giving it some time and it will come. If you only want to focus on the kingdom building theme you're probably better of jumping straight for Book 2, but Book 1 got a great character focused story, which gets me to my point, what really differenciates this story from others is this focus, which is really well done, and makes me want to see the characters evolution. So yeah keep up the good work, it can become a great story.
What's A King Without A System?
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I really got out of hand with the first volume, honestly. But when you get the scenes for those characters when you know what could have been their future, I want you to feel something. It's basically a reply to those novels where the MC meets a character that he knew before reincarnation that would then be given a backstory that you really don't care about. If I want people to care, I'll show them why the MC does what he does. Thanks for the review! I'll work harder to get these characters the ending they deserve.