Review Detail of JVenior in What's A King Without A System?

I don't have much time to write up a long-winded review, but I wanted to get this posted before I forget. As requested on the forums, I gave the first 11 chapters a read through. I was thoroughly entertained. The grammar could use a bit of cleaning, but the story carried itself well without causing any confusion. The world seems fascinating, while the characters all have decent and mostly realistic dialogue, allowing me as a reader to fall into the story easily. I did skim ahead to the R-18 chapter, but more out of my own curiosity than anything. I don't typically read novels with steamy content, but I applaud the author for taking the risk and making things seem as tasteful as they can be. Your stability of updates seems great, but I'm not one to talk - being that I tend to fluctuate my releases from once a day to even having months in-between chapters. Altogether its a fun story with a competent writer, what's not to like? =D