Review Detail of Amoracius in Queen of the Castaway Isle

This Webnovel is a gem! I’m generally not a fan of Magic’s surrealism but the way it is written into the story has an eerie, plausibly supernatural quality to it. Is it madness, is it real? Very compelling. To the author, you have a wonderful concept and story. You have excellent writing chops and could def put this on amazon or whatever as a series or stand alone book. You do need to work on transitions a touch, commas and some spelling /grammar oddities...but that’s just a little editing and you are golden. Your characters aren’t just stand ins....they aren’t perfect yet but I’ve seen well regarded published authors do less. Anyway please keep up the good work and keep growing your world.