Review Detail of Afney in SYSTEM WITH FREE SHOP IN MULTIVERSE!

I dont think I will ever understand why people keep writing ****ty stories for ****ty reasons. "Travel the multiverse for fun and sex!" If you are going to write a story, write a fuccking story. Put time into it, develop relationships, dont just have your mc loaded up with literally every cheat. Where does it go from there? I can finish your story for you. "Mc (dont care to remember any name) has all the power and gets to sleep with all the girls." THE END. Congratz. And wth is with him forcing himself on girls? He has cheats but still needs to force his way? Thats called crap writing. Im sick of so many new authors who just write their own wet dreams. If you want to make a harem, make one. Do. Not. Half. Ass. Your. Writing. Because. You. Want. To. Write. Porn. Your characters are flat and extremely uninteresting. Focus on actual relationships, or better yet, actual plot development.