Review Detail of RedNight in Dark King: Revenge Is Painful

Need more chapters!!! I love how you portray his sister as someone stronger than him. Also love the way he could still get his way with her. As for the harem part, I think you are introducing way too many girls in the starting chapters!! Take it slow, write the important parts or arcs more broadly so that people have enough time to go through the protagonist’s emotions. My review might seem like I am better than you, but it’s just a single fan’s constructive criticism! Good health!