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Daohei
DaoheiLv54yr
2020-10-28 07:05

too much **** wolf not enough vampire even though i came for werewolf, it is still a vampire fanfic ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Nevvan
4.4
109 Chs

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noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

Reveal spoiler

5yr

LPummill3
LPummill3Lv14

I Finally find a story where Rebekah gets some love And this is how you end it.

4yr
loki_karstark
loki_karstarkLv4

—/——————-nice story——-(-(/(/((/(/(/(/(/(/(/(/(/(/(//(/(/(:(/(:(/:(::(:5:(:(:(:(:(/(/(/(/(/)/(/(/((/(/(/(:/(/(/(/(/5/(;-(-((-;-;-;-;-;-(-(-(-(;-;

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Blue_Sovereign
Blue_SovereignLv5

More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More

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_6_6_6_
_6_6_6_Lv4

its a pretty good idea but the plot is just far too forced I mean come on its just sad how forced the plot is because the idea is pretty good and does have potential but this needs like a rewrite or something because as I have already said the story is being forced and just isn't good a way to have avoided the plot to feel so forced is by slowly introducing it like have the mc hang around the casts of **** wolf and originals and then after some time .You could have also have had the original jaguar's be something the casts brought instead of having their decendents brought. Also wats up with the Rebecca kinda romance thing ur going for seems forced ik I keep saying that but its true a lot of this fanfics plot is forced a way u could have maybe avoided this is by instead of doing the masssssssssiiiiiiivvvvvve time skips u had have like a best bits montage from the ice age to present events including y the mc is into Rebecca and their first meeting etc.

5yr
IERS
IERSLv15

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------A very good fanfiction i hope you don´t drop it------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

5yr
Jabyyn_Turner
Jabyyn_TurnerLv14

I am very happy about a Rebecca story you can look almost anywhere on web Wattpad and you won't find a story that focuses on Rebecca I think it's because she's probably the well-adjusted one of all of the family all she wants is to be human and to have a family again you know but she's never going to get it but like I said she's the most well-adjusted so she's never really shown it's all about Elijah and Klaus and Cole it's never about her so I thank you

4yr
Silly_Goose77
Silly_Goose77Lv11

The only reason u didn’t get a full 5 is bc of the ending but other than that I love the op mc and everything else about this.

4yr
HadesChampion
HadesChampionLv5

Great story with a -1000 ending , do not read as it will just make you rage at the terrible ending that comes from laziness to finish the story

5yr
Ayoub_Z
Ayoub_ZLv5

Nice story all the best and I hope you keep up the good work...................................................................................

5yr
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