Review Detail of Brandongould1994 in A Fool's Dream

This is Brandon gould I am responding to a review swap for this book so you can give a review on my book. First off I think it is a good book and I liked the chapters I read, But in my own opinion I think your MC is a Gary Stew. A Gary Stew is the male version of a Mary Sue. Now I read up to the fourth chapter. I think the world you created is very unique and interesting. Your MC can be overpowered but he needs weakness. I think he is a gary stew is because he has no flaws, Your MC is God and you have made a MC that can't die, or loss must pepole would find that type of MC boring. A Overpowered MC can be done you just got to let the bad guys beat up your MC and give him some weakness Just giving my opinion Hope to see that review