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Review Detail of Tonyorobsky in Shii

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Tonyorobsky
TonyorobskyLv134yrTonyorobsky

Interesting, but needs a lot of work. Terrible grammar and weird writing style (especially the dialogues). Needs to either improve English or translator use. No need to give the full status + description of the skills twice in the same chapter. No need to give skill description each time the status is opened. Description should only appear the 1st time or when there is an update/level-up. Nice plot. Some details on some of his actions would be nice. Like how he made his IA. You need good hardware to house one, yet we don’t know how he acquired said hardware. Nice protagonist, though bringing back past trauma contradict all the time he spent dealing with them and getting over them. I hope there will be more character development with the potential harem members. A bit more description of the surroundings (I may have skipped some things because it was painful to read).

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Jokr_Avenger

Liked it!

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chichi32310
chichi32310Lv13chichi32310

it's not that bad though I think it's abandoned