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Great story bad grammar fggdhmfnfhmfgjmdtyjdthnrthmfyumdghndthnetyndtujrtumrtumetumfndfhndgumfgumdfgnndfhjftujdghjdtyjdghmfgmhvnmdfghmdtyjdfyj

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Jokr_Avenger
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Man, from the beginning I warned of grammar, English is not my most advanced language, I have Japanese, Italian and Spanish, English would be like the basics

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Jokr_Avenger
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Even my russian is better

Jokr_Avenger:Man, from the beginning I warned of grammar, English is not my most advanced language, I have Japanese, Italian and Spanish, English would be like the basics
4yr
Victor_Esquivel_1459
Victor_Esquivel_1459Lv1Victor_Esquivel_1459

Don’t worry about it it’s still readable. It’s just that you confuse he for she and vice versa; among other small things.

Jokr_Avenger:Man, from the beginning I warned of grammar, English is not my most advanced language, I have Japanese, Italian and Spanish, English would be like the basics
4yr
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