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chinatwain2003
chinatwain2003Lv34yr
2020-12-09 14:30

A writer myself, I have to say this novel was quite interesting. It was quite unexpected at a particular point, after the plot had been developing for a while. You see I though they were going to go accomplish their goal, but they were actually just following along with their predetermined destiny. I was pleasantly surprised by the creativity of the author and the uniqueness of the characters. 10/10 would recommend to a friend. 11/10 would continue to read.

God Of Immortals

Primate
4.9
250 Chs

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Primate
PrimateAuthor

Thanks for the review. Immortality is yours 🙏☺

4yr
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Primate
PrimateAuthor

This is a work of mine, so I will greatly sing its praises. If you like epic xianxia and ultimate Dao fantasy, this work is for you. Packed with immortals, gods, divines, mortals, elementals, demons and so on. You are in for a big treat.

4yr

Hyowha
HyowhaLv5

I'm not joking, this book is dope. What interests me the most here is the maim character. How can someone be so fleshed out in just the 29 chapters, it baffles me. The world building is interesting, but I hope it adds a little more uniqueness within the chinese xianxia genre. All in all, a book well worth reading!

4yr
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Not_ActiveLv1

I’m giving them all a 5 because you executed them perfectly. honestly, world background, and character design deserved more than a 5!!! I loved how descriotive it was, it flowed easily and I felt like I was standing right there. I’m also a fan of an epic plot, and I can’t wait to see how this story will end!!! Greak work!!!!!!!!

4yr
LordSputnik
LordSputnikLv13

The Good: A good xianxia without any useless fluff for the most part. Author puts in plenty of effort to keep the quality high and it shows! The Bad: The cultivation levels are very hard to follow, I personally don't like it when I have to take a mental note of the levels because they are not intuitive. A slow pace is good, but going too slow makes it a chore to keep up with. I personally don't feel anything unique from the MC or the world, I feel like a plain character was placed in a generic xianxia world instead of building the world around the character. Sorry if that doesn't make much sense. The Neutral: While this novel doesn't try anything new, I feel like the author is aware of that and plays to its strengths making it a very solid novel amongst a sea of cultivation novels. (Although the cultivation novel sea is many times smaller than the romance novel sea)

3yr
Devilish_crow
Devilish_crowLv3

A well writen story so far. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4yr
kingkongbuddha
kingkongbuddhaLv2

A great novel with good focus on the MC and good character building. Great paced with very little filler, although the're a few chapter released, the world building is amazing. it's one of the better cultivation stories I've read.

4yr
Kronos_Renegade
Kronos_RenegadeLv2

This book as had me hooked since I started reading it. The perfect blend of character development action and backstory. An amazing read from start to finish. I think this novel will be officially published and promptly turned in to a movie in the future.

4yr
FantasyFirstKing
FantasyFirstKingLv2

This book as had me hooked since I started reading it. The perfect blend of character development action and backstory. An amazing read from start to finish. In my opinion it should be officially published and promptly turned in to a movie in the future.

4yr
Goddess_of_fairies
Goddess_of_fairiesLv2

Amazing it’s the first story were it feels like it could actually happen . Every part of it is feels real the story has allot of potential and the author is using it in a creative way And the more you read the more you see it’s uniqueness i am sure that any experienced reader will be happily surprised. If there is any changes I will updated the review in the comments

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