Beginning was a bit rough, it seems you are getting better at writing. Less run-ons and camma errors. I like the charcter ideas, but at the beginning you were going everywhere. Now it seems more solid, I would like to read more.
EvilGodZ
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LIKEAlex1911:I was wondering how can this novel has such a high rating, so misleading.
RedlilyRosa:Is good I read it myself. If u read 1 chapter only and then judge then u will never understand.
I mean that is your opinion, why u have to be so selfish and attack the author. He did nothing to u.
Alex1911:I read till ch 16, still can’t say I like it xd
Yeah, it’s my opinion. I didn’t even put up any reviews so it doesn’t affect the ratings, why do you have to attack me? it’s not even your story.
RedlilyRosa:I mean that is your opinion, why u have to be so selfish and attack the author. He did nothing to u.
Alex1911:Yeah, it’s my opinion. I didn’t even put up any reviews so it doesn’t affect the ratings, why do you have to attack me? it’s not even your story.