Review Detail of wheelmann2003 in The Female lead is a Lesbian

ok so I just want to start off by saying that I stopped at chapter 58. Now I really love the premise of this story and the female lead, her attitude, her personality and just her in general is highly entertaining. now that said I have to complain about how just way too much is going on in the story all at once, I would say about half of the chapters I read should be happening in the background to be found out later, not explored all at once as they are happening plus the enemies and negative effects are happening too cluttered together. please take this criticism as it was meant in a constructive manner because I love the world and characters you are building, I just think you are trying to build it too fast. like I said I stopped at chapter 58 and I feel that with as many incidents that happened in those 58 chapters that I should have been on chapter 150 and also the time felt stagnant because even with 150 chapters worth of content we were only like a week into the story. so please work on the pacing of your story and I'll probably check in after a few months to see about any improvements so thanks for your hard work Author-Kami