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Misaomi
MisaomiLv104yrMisaomi

Okay, I don't know how to start with this... First of all the concept is unique, definitely not new, but it is a very unique concept. Unfortunately, from what I read and observed from the story is, that the realism is definitely not an aspect that's very prominent, everything happens too fast, and it's very straight forward but for me the pacing is too fast, the details on the characters aren't very fleshed out, from what I read. The side characters seemed too unrealistic and very unlikeable, the MC and FL as far, as I can describe we're decent? For me I feel like the FL just popped out of nowhere, there was no hints, no past relation and felt fake. I mean who just pop out of no where just cause a woman you don't even know want to commit suicide, I get that it's fiction but the way the FL was introduced, was sudden and it really felt unnatural. Also the word "feminist" always rubbed me the wrong way, Im NOT a hater for feminist, but they have a reputation for hating on the opposite gender :/ The way men were described here were just horrible, not every man has a cheating, cheap, sex driven, money and fame hungry personality. If the FL really advocate for equality, then please do not describe men as a typical hentai character. I have not read that far yet, but the feel of the story feels unrealistic and cliche, but the story has a very unique concept. Again I don't hate you Author, in fact I still like the story but the way it was presented could have been better. Also the typos and punctuation, comma, spelling sometimes we're a bit off, I'm not a grammar person but I did notice it. I will still support the story. Please continue the story. thank you. Also every story, for me is always unique in its own way :)

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viLelouch
viLelouchLv4viLelouch

Hello, somehow, have you written a piece of your own? Because I think you would be a great writer... so let me know.

Misaomi
MisaomiLv10Misaomi

Thank you for the compliment, but I'm not really good at writing stories, maybe fanfiction but not writing GOOD stories. I can make a good observation, and or a review but I can't make a story, since I also do not have the time to make a story. I can be a good editor but not an Author :)

viLelouch:Hello, somehow, have you written a piece of your own? Because I think you would be a great writer... so let me know.
viLelouch
viLelouchLv4viLelouch

Is that so? Then it would be a great help if I could get reviews from you. I highly regarded the way you are making reviews. Well, you see, I’m trying to make a story of my own and I’m hoping it would turn out to be GOOD. 😊

Misaomi:Thank you for the compliment, but I'm not really good at writing stories, maybe fanfiction but not writing GOOD stories. I can make a good observation, and or a review but I can't make a story, since I also do not have the time to make a story. I can be a good editor but not an Author :)
Misaomi
MisaomiLv10Misaomi

Aw thank you. Sure, I can check it out when I have time, if I'll even have time. With the virus spreading in my country, my school load is also increasing, I might or might not have the time. Thank you though, I'll definitely check it out at some point :) Good Luck with your book. (My review might not be helpful but I'll try my best)

viLelouch:Is that so? Then it would be a great help if I could get reviews from you. I highly regarded the way you are making reviews. Well, you see, I’m trying to make a story of my own and I’m hoping it would turn out to be GOOD. 😊
Misaomi
MisaomiLv10Misaomi

Aw thank you. Sure, I can check it out when I have time, if I'll even have time. With the virus spreading in my country, my school load is also increasing, I might or might not have the time. Thank you though, I'll definitely check it out at some point :) Good Luck with your book. (My review might not be helpful but I'll try my best)

viLelouch:Is that so? Then it would be a great help if I could get reviews from you. I highly regarded the way you are making reviews. Well, you see, I’m trying to make a story of my own and I’m hoping it would turn out to be GOOD. 😊
viLelouch
viLelouchLv4viLelouch

Then thanks ahead. Anyways, the virus sure is troublesome. It’s spreading in my country too. City’s were in locked down. Hope we can get through this healthy and safe. Thanks again.

Misaomi:Aw thank you. Sure, I can check it out when I have time, if I'll even have time. With the virus spreading in my country, my school load is also increasing, I might or might not have the time. Thank you though, I'll definitely check it out at some point :) Good Luck with your book. (My review might not be helpful but I'll try my best)