Review Detail of AwronZizao in ttcyvtguycc

Thanks for your opinion but what chapter did you stop at? Also I never tried to make the main-character super smart, he’s just a slightly cautious person that’s all. And calling everyone an idiot isn’t exactly the correct way to proceed they are more of too happy. Sorry about my bad grammar on that point I can’t say anything as I’m aware that my grammar isn’t the best. About the seriousness of the story, I actually started this with the purpose of it being a comedy but turns out I’m not funny so I turned it Into a fantasy. But once again I understand you’re point of view and thanks for reading until now.

My bad if I come across as trying to flame or anything, I just try and be as honest as possible. The idea of the story is good, I'd have probably enjoyed it if everything else was worked upon properly. I say the character should have been smart simply because, the character has like 4-5 S-SSS rank skills that increase his cognitive abilities. If I remember correctly, he had the skill to think a whole lot faster than normal people, correct? Even if he's not smart originally, he'd still be a heck of a lot smarter than most people with that ability, simply because he can think through everything at like, 10-100x the speed of others? Of course, most of that would be my own assumption, I did read the story yesterday and to be honest, I didn't bother to read the entire status lmao, it's a bit long after a while. I simply called everyone an idiot, because that's how they came across. When he interacted with the "spirits" it came across as a bunch of children talking to each other, I'm not saying it as an insult either, It genuinely reminded me of such a thing. However, all of my opinions aside, I'm sure some people will like your story, just isn't for me pal. Good luck with your stories and improvement. :)

That's because the spirits are supposed to be childish or child-like, I purposely made then that way and that would actually be explained in the future. Because of their eternal lives spirits end up having a very small or short span of attention and eventually start regressing into a child-like state and if you know some mythology you probably already heard that spirits are mischievous and playful creatures. The reason why the mc acts that way despite having skills that should power up his intellectual is that those skills can't all integrate his mind or brain at once otherwise he wouldn't handle it and even though he would be fine the skills efficiency would be way lower, so those skills are slowly integrating with him and that's also one of the reasons he has low control over his skills. Not forgetting his unreasonable strong spr that makes it harder for the skills to merge with him because his soul is too dense. I don't mind you being honest, I'm just saying what I feel you ended up misunderstanding because of my poor writing.