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Moose_3565
Moose_3565Lv133yrMoose_3565

This had potential but unfortunately it just went nowhere with it. Idk if it’s the translation or the author, but the writing just feels kind of empty. Nothing the MC does makes sense, and nothing the other characters do make sense. If you like a story where people either just suck off the MC for everything he does, or are retarded villains who get themselves killed in 2 seconds, then I guess you’d like this. My biggest problem is the story progression just seems so poor. You’ll have half a chapter dedicated to random filler bull**** nobody cares about, then a time skip of 6 months, before throwing some dumb ass situation at the MC where everybody acts like a fucking robot. There are no emotions reading this novel. It is however decent if ur just reading for something to fill time. Don’t expect to enjoy it though.

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Gacha Sovereign

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FixtenAuthorFixten

Ahaha, my inexperienced self... I want to rewrite it, but it has established and affected the later chapters, so sadly I can't. Anyway, thank you for your review

Moose_3565
Moose_3565Lv13Moose_3565

It definitely has a lot of potential, and writing only gets better with practice. (I know if I tried to write something it’d be extremely awful haha) I still have it in my reading list I’ll probably pick it back up at some point to see how it’s progressing

Fixten:Ahaha, my inexperienced self... I want to rewrite it, but it has established and affected the later chapters, so sadly I can't. Anyway, thank you for your review