Word of warning: the premise of the story is amazing and the plot itself is not half bad, but everything is ruined by the worst grammar you'll ever see. It actually induces physical pain from reading more than a couple chapters at once, so be prepared for literal headache if you decide to dive in. P.S.: I really hope author finds himself an editor, it would be a waste of a good fanfic if nothing gets fixed
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LIKEUPD: writing actually gets better and more legible every dozen chapters or so, here's hoping that earlier chapters would eventually get rewritten too
does it get better now?? I'm almost crying here and I'm only on chapter 10, how tf does someone f*cks the grammar the same way he did on the start, I can't understand a single thing.
I honestly can't give you a straightforward answer. It gradually got MUCH better, then became completely illegible again by chapter 50 or so. I guess author found an editor along the way, then lost him again.
