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Littlepunnie
LittlepunnieLv34yr
2020-12-24 23:34

Hello Author! At first, I was confused by this and that, but when I read further which is not exactly that far, just 4 chapters made me think that it was worth reading. Little to no errors, the descriptions are not too much but it gave us, readers, the vivid clear idea of what you wanted to portray. The characters are cute especially hehe.. Your novel makes me think of k-dramas, actually I'm not a fan of a book with Korean names because I was raised by Chinese translated novels. But this book is a gem, a little polishing which Im still not sure because I haven't read the whole book yet because I do not have any coins and only I only have fastpasses. This book will be permanently added to my library. I do wish and hope I could write like you. Happy Writing!

Never Date a Man in Pink

MizA
4.8
230 Chs

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MizA
MizAAuthor

Thank you very much for giving it a try. I'm moved by your comments. And it's okay, I have a hard time with Chinese names as well, so I can relate to your bias. It's totally understandable! I hope you have time to read more, in the future. Also, thanks for the tips about what I should improve. I'll work on it!

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