Review Detail of Jusseff_Narvaez in Rise of the Demon God

I dropped the story because although the premise is cool, the author doesn't really have much of a description of anything. It's written like " he was trying to do this and 4 hours later he did it". also the translator continues to use names instead of he/she so a paragraph will have the name of someone said constantly instead of saying it initially and then saying he/she after. It's not that it's a bad story but it's written and translated in ways I personally don't like.