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Orthos
OrthosLv115yr
2019-12-10 20:51

first of all i know my english is pretty bad but deal with it lets split the review in two parts. the firstpart are chap1-48 if you like storys with are like written **** with cultivation to make it look better then this is your story atlest its one of the better ones of its kind after chapter 48 the story makes the mother of all nosedives everything exept the humor dies painfull i will put in some exampells but there are stong spoilers SPOILER DOWN BELOW exploding dicks erosuu tipexplosion oh i allmost forgot he ****t his grandma she is 120 if all of shis dont bother you then this is the perfect story for you

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InsanelyParanoid
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Haha~~ Was it fun ride? :D I laughed a lot while writing hmmm :D

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XXXXCLv3

I randomly came here.... and damn grandma??!! I can't even imagine this... uhhh

firebladeX
firebladeXLv1

*was it A fun ride* Even in your novel you are missing out 'a' and 'the' everywhere. Come on man.

InsanelyParanoid:Haha~~ Was it fun ride? :D I laughed a lot while writing hmmm :D
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