For me, the story was a bit fast paced and therefore seemed unrealistic also the male lead (upto this point) just seems interested in s*x and the girl lets it happen lile there were no consequences for him leaving. Also sometimes the tense switches up which gets a bit confusing to read. This my personal opinion and i also want to thank the author for putting in the hardwork to write the story
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