I like the story BUT.. you must rectify your mistakes. 1. The story Is too fact paced making the story very unrealistic. đ 2. The character background should be much more solid 3. I don't like the fact that he's harassing her and she's letting him do it. I would like if the FL has a strong character who embraces her weaknesses.đ¤ I like that she is from a military background 4. The Male lead must do some serious grovelling to do , before marriage is highly appreciated đ Please don't misunderstand this review, I hope you you will improve and give us good book. All the best!đâ¤
TheIllusionist
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