Review Detail of Qwestar in (*Dropped*)

Grammar is ok. Your problem is your mc has no thought process, always going with the flow, random character #1 wants you out of town, then allows rumors which puts you in a bad light? Ok, lets leave for 300 years, meets random guy again, asking to be made younger? Sure, you only did nothing to help me, kicked me out of town and all, ok. Says he doesnt want to go to the academy, shows magic, guy asks him to teach there, then he says ok? Just no.