Review Detail of jean17161 in His possession: Her Destiny

The story seem really interesting right from the start. You want to know who's calling out to her so you just keep reading. The character seems down to earth and believable like some of her reactions would probably happen in real life. I like the fact that she move clearly from paragraph to paragraph it was smooth the details were good and The Voice even had a character of its own and I like how I still can't figure out if it's a vampire or werewolf great job!!!