Review Detail of yildiz12345 in My One Sweet Love:Darling Superstar Wife
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The story is not packed well. In just 4 chapters we meet the current ML and then he left and all of a sudden the FL gave birth and she parents gave the child up for adoption and the FL is upset but she doesnt even do anything to get her child back instead 6 years go by and suddenly the old ML is back the FL gets hit by a car and the new ML comes back. I'm sorry author this isnt something I can continue to read. You have some good ideas however your not executing them well. If you fixed up how the story is written and the way of events you can really make this a popular novel.
My One Sweet Love:Darling Superstar Wife
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Thanks for your sincere review it's really appreciated but I think my novel is just alright the way it is. The funny twists in the plot is what makes it unique and different from the rest. Once again, thanks for the review but I urge you to read the novel again with a new interest and perspective and assure you'll love it but if you choose not to continue, I'm sorry you'll be missing out on a great story with a wonderful end