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Narcisz
NarciszLv125yr
2019-09-29 04:57

Hi there ^^ First review ever that I wrote ! So I'm writing there as I reached chapter 43 and I gotta say the story is really good because : - even if I'm not an English native speaker, I can say that the grammar is definitely good. And if you compare it to the average fanfic, then it is a no brainer this one is a pearl of grammar by comparison ! The sole point that I regret is the lack of separation when there is a time skip. - The characters are super detailed and most importantly the MC and the secondary characters are well fleshed out. The MC can be a bit too strange or overwhelming when you begin reading but she will grow on you real quick as she is badass, sassy and so much more. - The story has got a good rhythm and get you hooked even me as I'm not a Harry Potter fan (and yes that exist :p ). And you will often wonder yourself what will the MC do next or simply enjoy the bashing physical or psychological that she does. ( Poor Severus ! ) So read it and don't be discouraged if you don't understand all that is relevant to the magic of the MC or her background as that will be revealed along the chapters !

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does she ever learn to use the local magic system ?

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