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Arcibo
ArciboLv154yr
2020-10-14 05:54

The book starts off alright but goes downhill fast. The main character goes through the usual ‘do a good deed but die so gets reincarnated’ tropes and then is immediately thrust into a poorly written life or death situation. 15 chapters later however, we discover that she has roughly 250,000 times more talent at magic than the best wizards (not a joke thats actually just a random guess, its actually much more tham 250,000), she gains a mysterious teacher (who turns out to be the emperor of some random country) gets adopted by him (becoming a princess), gains a pet dragon, adopts one of the last surviving fairies in the world and then is able to kill hundreds of monsters withour breaking a sweat. Later on in the novel she falls in love with some random kid because he gave her a fucking water bottle and a sword, this starts an utter cringefest of her blushing literally every time she sees him and looking like an utter ****wit. I wouldn’t reccommend this to someone over the age of 5.

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sergioGM
sergioGMLv6

I was going to start reading it but after such a review... I better try another novel.

Arcibo
ArciboLv15

You should definetely avoid this garbage

sergioGM:I was going to start reading it but after such a review... I better try another novel.
Arcibo
ArciboLv15

*definitely

Arcibo:You should definetely avoid this garbage
Bumba
BumbaLv1

I agree with you 100% . If I saw your review earlier I wouldn't have start reading this ***t.

Arcibo
ArciboLv15

Lol, you read certain chapters thinking ‘oh this is pretty good’ then the mc starts blushing again.

Bumba:I agree with you 100% . If I saw your review earlier I wouldn't have start reading this ***t.
_Meizhen_
_Meizhen_Lv13

Thank you foR stopping me in readIng this... or else it will be another waste of my tiMe...

Tsuna_Aotsuki
Tsuna_AotsukiLv3

though your comment it was quite an oddball

Alibi_Lullaby
Alibi_LullabyLv5

why is you review the only 3 stars in here? this seems suspicious either you have no taste or the author deletes reviews.

Arcibo
ArciboLv15

?

Alibi_Lullaby:why is you review the only 3 stars in here? this seems suspicious either you have no taste or the author deletes reviews.
Alibi_Lullaby
Alibi_LullabyLv5

this is the only review below three stars for this novel out of like 100

Arcibo:?
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

I don’t know if it’s too late but avoid his other book “ah chun” it was great for a good part of it but then she has 99 samsara through a time skip and after that the rest plays out, until over 100 chapters later we find out the samsara has 100. It literally restarts everything.

Alibi_Lullaby:this is the only review below three stars for this novel out of like 100
Alibi_Lullaby
Alibi_LullabyLv5

oh yeah i couldn't finish that one

UndeadBeing:I don’t know if it’s too late but avoid his other book “ah chun” it was great for a good part of it but then she has 99 samsara through a time skip and after that the rest plays out, until over 100 chapters later we find out the samsara has 100. It literally restarts everything.
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