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Review Detail of I_Am_Shy in Holy Chef, Crazy Empress

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I_Am_Shy
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Not a full five stars because I didn't 100% enjoy reading this :v First things first, the translation needs to be proofread. At first I was alright with a few mistakes here and there, but it got annoying as I kept on reading. There were sentences that were too chinglish and somewhat MTL (I'm not trying to be demeaning here) and it made the conversation slightly... eh, call me an idiot but I could feel my brain working twice harder just to understand the sentences. Not a lot of these, but the quality could be improved. Second, please get a quality checker. Or a quality control person, because I keep finding pages(?) more like parts that aren't supposed to be there. Parts suddenly cut off, panels that have grey stripes or are discoloured, looks like some sort of pirated content (please tell me this isn't pirated content, please. I trust WN to not post pirated content but I'm having doubts with my search history sometimes proving me wrong.) Now that I'm done with venting my dissatisfaction (until further reading that is) time for me to gush hahah XD I love love LOVE the FL, she's very badass and her cat-like expressions make me want to fall for her (●♡∀♡) her design is pretty unique compared to the side characters, though I still don't understand why people don't notice her forehead... thing. Idk what it's called, but the lotus/flower petals-like thing on her forehead. Might be cannon fodders having negative IQ as usual, but it bugs me when people don't realize that she is the Empress XD Also!!! More interactions with Ye please!!! He's too adorable!!! Parent-child interactions are very wholesome aii (*´ω`*) and the postscripts are very funny XD also, feels like a reverse-harem in the making and I'm totally okay with that, which is odd since harem stories aren't usually my cup of tea, but if it's this FL... yes please. ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ TL;DR There are some parts I dislike but I still like the story despite that, I rec if you like strong FL and face-slapping. Cheers~

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