Review Detail of LiLhyz in The Blue Pearl

The novel is written very well, the creativity and word usage are superb. How the author describes the world well and is very detailed from characters to the current state, it enables one to picture it out clearly. FOR FANTASY readers out there, please try it out and it won't disappoint. Good Job! My only feedback is how slow it was from the start, but I noticed that after a few chapters, it has already improved. I prefer a really fast-paced story, but that's just me. To: ElsbroSparka Sorry for redoing the review. I wasn't finished yet earlier and I got a call from work. I pressed on post by accident.