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Review Detail of ElsbroSparka in The Blue Pearl

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ElsbroSparka
ElsbroSparkaAuthor4yrElsbroSparka

Thank you all for reading this book. Here you can share all your thoughts, first impression, critiques, brutal comments about the book. It's okay, I can take it because it'll only make me change those bits that aren't 'doing it' for the readers. Of course, I can't satisfy every reader out there but will do my best to create a great reading experience. Really excited to hear from you all...

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The Blue Pearl

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Dechet
DechetLv5Dechet

Can you explain the narration is it a a multiple Mc and if there is many POV change?

4yr
ElsbroSparka
ElsbroSparkaAuthorElsbroSparka

The first two chapters are neutral, after that it's mostly Tristan's POV. And throughout the volume, POV shifts to another character, but not for long.

Dechet:Can you explain the narration is it a a multiple Mc and if there is many POV change?
4yr
Dechet
DechetLv5Dechet

Ok thanks, your prologue was a bit confusing on this.

ElsbroSparka:The first two chapters are neutral, after that it's mostly Tristan's POV. And throughout the volume, POV shifts to another character, but not for long.
4yr
ElsbroSparka
ElsbroSparkaAuthorElsbroSparka

The prologue is the POV of an old woman, Ava. I am not going to use her again to narrate the story.

Dechet:Ok thanks, your prologue was a bit confusing on this.
4yr
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