Review Detail of Irene_Xu in Surviving In My Novel
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Writing Quality- One star. Too many owos uwus. Its almost as if the Author doesn't know how irl people interact. Stability of Updates- Five stars. Anything that has around 50 chapters is good stability in my eyes. Story Development- One star. Author made him too OP, and he's just going around doing whatever random thing he wants. He beats up a bunch of first years with his x100 power in relation to them as a first year, with the nick PP Big. Yeh no. He uses his weird plot armor face changing thing to become a God professor. Also, what happened to the Michelle girl plot? What? iTs aLmOst aS If tHe aUtHor dOeSN't uNdeRStAnd wHaT tHe heLl hE's dOing Character Design- One star. What is the point of designing all these characters if you just have the MC toss them around? World Background- Four stars. I like the power system. I mean, I like all academy setting,,, Just wasted on a story written like this.
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no way the author was able to spam out 40 chapters of that cluster**** as a background for a serious story. i've just checked it out again, and- jesus christ. anyways, it'd be great if the author had a chapter summarizing what happened the first arc for people who don't wanna read the whole of it, because no way in hell am I gonna read that. like, terminologies, characters, stuff like that. because at this point, im pretty confused even skipping to chapter 40.
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Spoiler Pretty much first 40 or so chapters are very fast paced parody. He died and in his last year wrote harem novel, bcs ofc he was young... Last day of his life ppl trashtalk his novel. He dies and is reincarnated to his novel with op system and op stats, In a body of a mob character. At first he tries to follow novel script. Best girl wants him, he became best at everything and even 2nd identity as a teacher... Of best at teaching Mc is every second closer to finding the truth that he was delusional and that this is real and not his ****ty novel So he wants to start clear again and thats about in 42nd chapter? Not sure Its satire while being human, then he became devil and Bang u find a gem story mate Btw i have read this novel twice and trust me if i say first 40 chapters sucks, BUT its way better than invisible dragon
Sycamore:no way the author was able to spam out 40 chapters of that cluster**** as a background for a serious story. i've just checked it out again, and- jesus christ. anyways, it'd be great if the author had a chapter summarizing what happened the first arc for people who don't wanna read the whole of it, because no way in hell am I gonna read that. like, terminologies, characters, stuff like that. because at this point, im pretty confused even skipping to chapter 40.
RainbowBeheader:Spoiler Pretty much first 40 or so chapters are very fast paced parody. He died and in his last year wrote harem novel, bcs ofc he was young... Last day of his life ppl trashtalk his novel. He dies and is reincarnated to his novel with op system and op stats, In a body of a mob character. At first he tries to follow novel script. Best girl wants him, he became best at everything and even 2nd identity as a teacher... Of best at teaching Mc is every second closer to finding the truth that he was delusional and that this is real and not his ****ty novel So he wants to start clear again and thats about in 42nd chapter? Not sure Its satire while being human, then he became devil and Bang u find a gem story mate Btw i have read this novel twice and trust me if i say first 40 chapters sucks, BUT its way better than invisible dragon
honestly though. I read it all the way to the latest chapter. While it's most definitely better than the first 40 chapters, it was- yeah, more serious. However, it was also extremely melodramatic. I don't mind edgy, but the reverse-rape scene was not very tastefully done. Everytime she writes "a single tear slid down his cheeks" or something similar to that, I shrink into my balls from second-hand embarassment. And there were other problems with it too. It's not bad overall for this site. For this site, however. I loved this author's ideas, but the execution was absolutely miserable.
Yup, you got a point here But on this site there arent that good novels. So at least this idea count
Sycamore:honestly though. I read it all the way to the latest chapter. While it's most definitely better than the first 40 chapters, it was- yeah, more serious. However, it was also extremely melodramatic. I don't mind edgy, but the reverse-rape scene was not very tastefully done. Everytime she writes "a single tear slid down his cheeks" or something similar to that, I shrink into my balls from second-hand embarassment. And there were other problems with it too. It's not bad overall for this site. For this site, however. I loved this author's ideas, but the execution was absolutely miserable.
I mean, I gotta say, there are quite a few good novels if you look carefully and for the right tags and synopses.
RainbowBeheader:Yup, you got a point here But on this site there arent that good novels. So at least this idea count
I beg to differ, Supreme Magus and Dragonborn Saga are amazing, but very different works... OFC as you say, most of the stuff on the site is absolute trash. And I mean, not fit to even have readers... It's the kind of stuff an author first needs to review themselves - And after they can say they'd not feel embarassed reading it themselves, then they can publish it(after they've worked out the worst linguistic issues, and covered up the worst plot holes).
RainbowBeheader:Yup, you got a point here But on this site there arent that good novels. So at least this idea count
Dragonborn might, never read before Supreme magus is one of the most shiniest **** i have ever saw... Yeah ok mc and that tower are good i agree but how the hell can this world not colapse? When every major character there is dumber than the other. Tho wtf was that op being in mcs kingdom and her stupidier servants??? I cant believe author ever thought that u have to have at least some ppl wiser and more inteligent than monkey to run a country. All was just setup for mc and nothing more Try other u can find way better novels here
Ahtu_Flagg:I beg to differ, Supreme Magus and Dragonborn Saga are amazing, but very different works... OFC as you say, most of the stuff on the site is absolute trash. And I mean, not fit to even have readers... It's the kind of stuff an author first needs to review themselves - And after they can say they'd not feel embarassed reading it themselves, then they can publish it(after they've worked out the worst linguistic issues, and covered up the worst plot holes).
Who's actually being stupid here? xD Do you really think it's the wisest that rule countries in the real world or something? It's those in power that rule, and their world is the same. The ways they obtain their power may vary, and the way they can work it varies. But it's the powerful and ambitious that rule at the end of the day, not the wise. To quote Bertrand Russell: "The whole problem with the world, is that fools are so sure of themselves, and wise men so full of doubts." - Meaning that wise people rarely seek to rule(as it conflicts with their very nature), or implement their understanding. Since they are still unsure of their findings. While fools/zealots are full of conviction, and will stop at nothing to impose their will. The dragon in Supreme Magus is a prime example(though I'd say he's on the border). And by all signs their world has collapsed due to the huge gaps in power, and the conflict of the most powerful beings in it - Over and over. Which ofc makes perfect sense that it would. You can not find a more realistic magic world on this site, I can pretty much guarantee that. It makes sense in terms of its politics, power balance, and its cruelties. The arrogance of its true overpowered rulers makes just as much sense. As does the mental development of its sentient beings in general. What I thought didn't make so much sense, was how much conviction his old beast friend showed at one point... Especially considering how treacherous his actions were after he saved him. Trying to manipulate an incredibly powerful, paranoid, and bordering on mentally unstable victim of endless suffering, through misinformation... That is just such an incredibly dangerous, imposing, and foolish idea - Completely at odds with the character. Had to stop reading for a while after that. But all in all, the author understands human nature, and sentience way better than any other writer you could dig up.
RainbowBeheader:Dragonborn might, never read before Supreme magus is one of the most shiniest **** i have ever saw... Yeah ok mc and that tower are good i agree but how the hell can this world not colapse? When every major character there is dumber than the other. Tho wtf was that op being in mcs kingdom and her stupidier servants??? I cant believe author ever thought that u have to have at least some ppl wiser and more inteligent than monkey to run a country. All was just setup for mc and nothing more Try other u can find way better novels here
So basically you hate the novel, for the same reason that I love it. It's realistic, and rulers are still very flawed and foolish beings.
RainbowBeheader:Dragonborn might, never read before Supreme magus is one of the most shiniest **** i have ever saw... Yeah ok mc and that tower are good i agree but how the hell can this world not colapse? When every major character there is dumber than the other. Tho wtf was that op being in mcs kingdom and her stupidier servants??? I cant believe author ever thought that u have to have at least some ppl wiser and more inteligent than monkey to run a country. All was just setup for mc and nothing more Try other u can find way better novels here
So basically you hate the novel, for the same reason that I love it. It's realistic, and rulers are still very flawed and foolish beings. Edit: Correction - A very realistic magic world.*
RainbowBeheader:Dragonborn might, never read before Supreme magus is one of the most shiniest **** i have ever saw... Yeah ok mc and that tower are good i agree but how the hell can this world not colapse? When every major character there is dumber than the other. Tho wtf was that op being in mcs kingdom and her stupidier servants??? I cant believe author ever thought that u have to have at least some ppl wiser and more inteligent than monkey to run a country. All was just setup for mc and nothing more Try other u can find way better novels here
Do you wish to argue that the magical overlords were trying to choose the wisest eligible people to put in charge? Well that would be true for some of them, but they would still inherit their flaws, and at the end of the day - They're still the true rulers, dictators. It works as it does, because that is how these most powerful beings believe it would work out best. One through direct control and ruling with an iron fist over his administrators, another by picking out loyalists that she thinks would do the best at the job, a 3rd letting nature take its course for the most part - But giving "essential help" and input to spur the advancement of civilization.
RainbowBeheader:Dragonborn might, never read before Supreme magus is one of the most shiniest **** i have ever saw... Yeah ok mc and that tower are good i agree but how the hell can this world not colapse? When every major character there is dumber than the other. Tho wtf was that op being in mcs kingdom and her stupidier servants??? I cant believe author ever thought that u have to have at least some ppl wiser and more inteligent than monkey to run a country. All was just setup for mc and nothing more Try other u can find way better novels here
Historically speaking, the same sort of things have more or less been tested(you could make an argument for the dragon's solution never having been given a fair shake). And such "powers behind the throne" systems have generally ended up with similar sort of issues(though non-magical in nature ofc). It's hauntingly realistic.
RainbowBeheader:Dragonborn might, never read before Supreme magus is one of the most shiniest **** i have ever saw... Yeah ok mc and that tower are good i agree but how the hell can this world not colapse? When every major character there is dumber than the other. Tho wtf was that op being in mcs kingdom and her stupidier servants??? I cant believe author ever thought that u have to have at least some ppl wiser and more inteligent than monkey to run a country. All was just setup for mc and nothing more Try other u can find way better novels here
The main reason i hate isnt bcs leaders are dumb as fk Its bcs they r way too retarded, pretty much everyone there tho Like you wrote its one of the best on this site! Thats it. This site have tons of garbage so ruler among garbage? Its cool in these days? If u dont think about it And yeah every ruler, even retarded needs somebody who is capable of something In magus they might kill themselve at home having dinner
Ahtu_Flagg:Who's actually being stupid here? xD Do you really think it's the wisest that rule countries in the real world or something? It's those in power that rule, and their world is the same. The ways they obtain their power may vary, and the way they can work it varies. But it's the powerful and ambitious that rule at the end of the day, not the wise. To quote Bertrand Russell: "The whole problem with the world, is that fools are so sure of themselves, and wise men so full of doubts." - Meaning that wise people rarely seek to rule(as it conflicts with their very nature), or implement their understanding. Since they are still unsure of their findings. While fools/zealots are full of conviction, and will stop at nothing to impose their will. The dragon in Supreme Magus is a prime example(though I'd say he's on the border). And by all signs their world has collapsed due to the huge gaps in power, and the conflict of the most powerful beings in it - Over and over. Which ofc makes perfect sense that it would. You can not find a more realistic magic world on this site, I can pretty much guarantee that. It makes sense in terms of its politics, power balance, and its cruelties. The arrogance of its true overpowered rulers makes just as much sense. As does the mental development of its sentient beings in general. What I thought didn't make so much sense, was how much conviction his old beast friend showed at one point... Especially considering how treacherous his actions were after he saved him. Trying to manipulate an incredibly powerful, paranoid, and bordering on mentally unstable victim of endless suffering, through misinformation... That is just such an incredibly dangerous, imposing, and foolish idea - Completely at odds with the character. Had to stop reading for a while after that. But all in all, the author understands human nature, and sentience way better than any other writer you could dig up.
Since you called them so bad, what do you compare them to? What leaders, from what story? And if you're gonna come out with some chinese novel with "flawless" leaders, that can do no wrong - I think you're the one that needs a reality check...
RainbowBeheader:Dragonborn might, never read before Supreme magus is one of the most shiniest **** i have ever saw... Yeah ok mc and that tower are good i agree but how the hell can this world not colapse? When every major character there is dumber than the other. Tho wtf was that op being in mcs kingdom and her stupidier servants??? I cant believe author ever thought that u have to have at least some ppl wiser and more inteligent than monkey to run a country. All was just setup for mc and nothing more Try other u can find way better novels here
RI, LOTM and similar Why r u even coming back, this is not you super awesome Magus for posting walls of text Also you dont need to decrease overall inteligence in novel for the sake of plot, tho most eastern novels do that
Ahtu_Flagg:Since you called them so bad, what do you compare them to? What leaders, from what story? And if you're gonna come out with some chinese novel with "flawless" leaders, that can do no wrong - I think you're the one that needs a reality check...
Decrease the overall intelligence? You know, there's a huge difference between being wrong, and being stupid... Furthermore, you've yet to give a single example of your original critique, you still give no comparison, you still fail to see that making leaders less than omniscient is not a stupid move a writer. It's realistic, I get now that realism is not your thing, you want grandeur - But don't pretend it's the novel that is unrealistic.
RainbowBeheader:RI, LOTM and similar Why r u even coming back, this is not you super awesome Magus for posting walls of text Also you dont need to decrease overall inteligence in novel for the sake of plot, tho most eastern novels do that
**. The leaders of a story are not the overall intelligence in the novel, they just live in their own "echo-chambers." And barely come across the disagreement from others in their line of work(with no outsiders input).
RainbowBeheader:RI, LOTM and similar Why r u even coming back, this is not you super awesome Magus for posting walls of text Also you dont need to decrease overall inteligence in novel for the sake of plot, tho most eastern novels do that