Review Detail of Oscillating_Sine in Surviving In My Novel

I only ask that you read carefully before posting a review, and please don’t just put a negative review because you personally don’t like a certain type of theme, I won’t bother with it. If I can improve on something, I will try, but I am not going to compromise the plot because someone doesn’t like the MC having a personality which they don’t like. Thanks for reading my novel!