Review Detail of ChuYang in (Will be rewritten)

It's certainly something I feel like I've seen before. The linearity of it makes it easy to understand and even imagine but there's also a room for improvement there. Especially in the grammar department but that shouldn't be a problem once you iron out the thing after editing. I've only reached a few of the earlier chapters but I can see the potential in this. Hope you give it the time it deserves author, might just turn into a noteworthy stepping stone for your future works!