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Bloody_Sage
Bloody_SageLv54yr
2020-05-08 12:04

There are a few incorrect Misspelled words and misplaced grammar but other than that I can't fault it I can see that this book has potential the in depth character building the power level requirements everything I see who is indicating that the book has a lot of potential. Especially with the system that it gives him kind of overpowered but not really much the ability to gain other races positive traits is actually very ingenious the character wasn't born powerful and does it to his own hard work and dedication which makes a story a thrilling and heart throbbing with battle I look forward to reading more chapters and see how this progresses. Good work author your fan fiction has made me stay up until 1:00 a.m. reading when I got work at 6:00 a.m. you feel accomplished because I do. Keep up the wonderful work

The Frost Demon of Universe 7

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