Review Detail of Sage_HiddenBear in The Lustful Dungeon Master (Hiatus)

The story started out really good. I mean I was honestly enjoying the fact the author was developing both the MC as well as the other female characters before engaging in illicit activities. It would increase the emotional connection right? Apparently the Author didn't feel the same. He then goes and introduces a female honestly randomly that the MC then proceeds to get with out of nowhere due to his neverending but never used lust. Has all these beauties already, doesn't use them, gets with random b*tch. I mean ok that's whatever it'll get better right? Wrong. Later right after an event having to do with the previous woman he then accepts a lady who is blatantly broadcasting "i'm going to kill you and take everything you have from you" vibes. Like he literally says he knows what she is doing but still accepts it anyways. The best part? He doesn't even trick her or do anything about it. This idiot even ends up sleeping with her. What. in . the flying FK!? The story then goes further about his escapades that then proceed to have the author show other dungeon masters conquering as well. Ok neato right? Then the MC goes and shuts of his system notifications. What?. Are you flying fk retarded? Do you need to get sodomized before realizing that your just making your MC make obviously stupid decisions!? Suffice it to say I'm done with this novel. The author purposefully showed his character to be rather cunning and intelligent early on then turns around and makes him one of the most retarded MC's I have ever had the misfortune of reading about. Don't read this novel.